Turn the offer you can pitch in your sleep into a sales page that sells it without you
A 3-week 1:1 sprint where you write your page and I whip every word into sales-ready shape until it’s finally DONE and bringing in the money your offer deserves.
$699 USD
Let’s Sprint →Your offer could turn a “good month” into your new normal if only your sales page would stop hiding in your Drafts folder
You’ve been selling it just fine when you pitch it in DMs, Slack channels with past clients, and sporadic emails to your list.
But “just fine” isn’t doing justice to the sales you COULD be making if you can point your audience to a sales page that:
- Has hyper-specific, magnetic messaging that customers quote back to you
- Guides your prospect to see why this, why you, why now
- Answers their questions so prospects swap “Let me think about it” for “where do I pay?”
- Lets you wake up to Stripe notifications instead of DMs to follow up
Sure, Claude and ChatGPT are great brainstorming partners to help you nut out the details of the offer…
But AI can’t quite capture the nuance, depth, and BRILLIANCE of your offer into concise, specific messaging without flattening it like a Nutella crepe (delish, but over in seconds).
And no matter how many times you prompt it to use your brand voice…you can never be sure whether it’s getting you closer to a sales page that sells or if AI’s just patting itself on the back.
So you’re left with either a sales page hastily thrown together by your digital intern (we can tell), or zero sales page at all.
All of which means your offer is stuck being half-heartedly pitched in the DMs instead of selling out in the gangbusters launch campaign it deserves!
The Sales Page Sprint is where we pull the brilliance out of your head (no flattening required) and turn it into a finished sales page that sells your offer all year round
You do the writing so it’s still in your unique voice.
But you won’t be writing blind.
I’ll take on the part that’s really freaking hard to do when it’s just you and your MacBook:
Knowing what to say about your offer so your prospect trusts you, and how to say it so they stop doom-scrolling long enough to hand over their card details.
Together, we will:
- Get so clear on your messaging that you can explain your offer the same way on your sales page, in an email, in the DMs, and at biz events filled with your dream prospects.
- Map out your sales page structure ― from the HERO down to the FAQs ― so you never sit down to write and wonder what the heck goes next.
- Fine-tune the language line by line until every section sounds like YOU, and not like something that could’ve been copy & pasted from any other coach/creator/service provider’s website.
…so when you’re ready to launch and scale your offer, you can just drop the link and let the page do the selling. (cha-ching!)
Here’s How It Works
Session 1: Strategy & Structure
Let’s start with the bits you’re wayyyy too close to untangle on your own.
We’ll tackle your offer from all different angles: What makes it different? What’s your positioning? What’s your audience really buying? (hint: it’s not the offer itself).
From there, I’ll map your sales page structure section by section so it speaks to your audience’s stage of awareness and guides them to see why this, why you, why now.
You’ll leave this session with a 360 degree understanding of your offer (in language your audience resonates with) + a clear writing plan so you know exactly what to write in each section.
In between sessions, you’ll go away and start smashing out your sales page.
But this won’t be yet another attempt where you re-write the same sentence for the 8th time…then close your laptop till you have “fresh eyes.”
Nope.
This time you’ll have a deadline to meet (which does wonders for making words flow) AND the security of knowing an expert copywriter is going to look over your words and make sure they’re hot and ready to sell.
Which is exactly what happens in…
Session 2: First Draft Review
Bring your first draft with all your glorious brain dumps, tangents, and the yellow-highlighted text you’re unsure about. (The more you write, the more I can help you fix it).
I’ll review your draft on the call, tell you the truth about what’s working and what’s underselling your offer (which ChatGPT won’t), and do on-the-spot rewrites so you can see how to make each line razor-sharp.
You’ll leave knowing why the new version works, and exactly how to refine your sales page to create instant connection and demand.
Session 3: Final Polish
We go through the finished draft with a fine-tooth comb, add in your social proof, and format it so it’s ready for your designer (or you) to upload to your website.
And Bob’s your uncle!
You’re not leaving with a doc full of notes and feedback that you gotta find 2 hours to implement.
You’re not left alone in your Google Doc to figure out what’s special about your offer, or overthinking whether you’ve said all the right things your audience needs to hear.
You’re walking away with a finished, launch-ready sales page that’s been looked over by a human copywriter since the beginning, AND the skillset to write the next one yourself.
By the end of the Sprint, you will have:
The piece de resistance of your launch 🎉 a fully-done sales page you can share everywhere any time you’re ready for a cash injection.
Fresh words to talk about your offer in socials, emails, on podcasts, and even when your Boomer uncle asks, “so what do you do again?”
The skillset to write the next sales page yourself so you’re not stuck in launch limbo.
Beyoncé-level confidence to shout about your offer from the rooftops and sell, sell, sell because your page has people ready to snap it up like, yesterday.
This Sprint is for creators, coaches, service providers, and online business owners who are 100% sold on their offer, but freeze up faster than a laptop with 47 Chrome tabs open when it comes to the blank page.
It’s especially for you if you’re sooo done with:
- Getting a list of recommendations on what to fix on your sales page, but never having the time to implement them
- Another item on your To-Do list you’ll “get to” (you won’t).
- Downloading a template to ditch the blank page, then staring at [Insert Promise Here] until you close the laptop and wait for “fresh eyes.”
- Outsourcing your copy just to get something that still misses the mark
- Wrestling with AI*, trying to get it to understand the nuance of what you do AND how to turn it into a page that isn’t dripping with AI-isms
AND you want:
- A copywriter who gets what you do, can spot the brilliance you’ve become numb to, and will tell you (kindly) when you’ve been overthinking the details or when you do need to go deeper.
- A sales page structure built for YOUR offer and audience, so you can open the doc and let the words pour out from your fingertips because you know exactly what to write.
- A deadline and a real person waiting to read and fix your draft, because nothing motivates you more than accountability.
Just look at my client who went from never having written a sales page to smashing her first draft in 3 days 👇
“Ash put the ideas that were free-flowing in my head into words.”
This was the first time I’d ever tried to write a sales page. I’m so close to my offer that the wording sounded a little bit too coachy. It all connected in my mind, but I was worried people would look at it and think, “I don’t get it.”
I wanted face-to-face help instead of filling out a template on my own (or with AI help only).
Ash has a very good ability of putting what I’m saying into words a regular person understands. She has an excellent template that explains every section of a sales page, and we adapted it to my offer. She showed me how to emphasize the outcomes and use the words people typically speak.
I finished my first draft in 3 days! And now I’m confident my sales page reads better for an audience who’s new to my world.
You can’t sell or scale as much as you want to if your page is stuck in Drafts or if you have to manually pitch every prospect 🫠
And I get it. When you have a gajillion other priorities wrestling for your attention, it feels easier to bump “write the sales page” to next week (or next month).
That’s why The Sales Page Sprint exists.
It’s the friendly shove you need to get your sales page in front of your dream customers so you can start getting “just bought!” emails from people you’ve never met.
I’ll be with you every step of the way untangling everything you want to say into one clear, magnetic message, challenging you to think like the person reading it (not as an expert), and showing you how to write in a way that lights a fire under your audience’s 🍑
So picture this:
It’s 3 weeks from now.
Your sales page is la-la-LIVE.
You sprinkle the link everywhere in your bio, your emails, your LinkedIn posts, your next podcast interview.
And sales roll in without you chasing a single one.
Hey, I’m Ash Chow.
Sales pages are my most highly requested deliverable that creators, personal brands (and even fellow copywriters) hire me for again and again because they know it delivers real results.
Like the time I helped:
- A first-time launcher in the arts & crafts world bring in $35k.
- A personal stylist 3X her conversions after a previous flop, and turned it into one of her best launches yet.
- An email marketing strategist bring in an extra $30k in her launch with a sales page that converted at 11.5%.
I know what it takes to write a sales page that shows off everything that makes your offer worth every cent, without sounding icky or bro-y (it’s a delicate balancing act).
And in this Sprint, I’ll show you how to pull that off for the offer you want to sell now, and all the ones after it.
After reading Ash’s copy, I felt less stress and fear about the launch, and WAY more confident my course would do well!
The result? Within 24 hours of launching, I hit 5-figures (with a $200 product!) AND I ended up with $35,000 for my first ever launch!
“Working with Ash on our sales page helped our sales jump by over 350%”
She didn’t just refine the sales page; she made sure the value of the product was front and center for our audience.
Every little detail of my sales page was analysed ensuring every bit of copy was purposeful and impactful.
I walked away not only with a polished and much more effective sales page but also with insights and copywriting strategies I’m now using throughout my entire business.
After our worst launch ever, working with Ash on both our sales page and email copy helped our sales jump by over 350%. If you’re thinking of working with Ash, don’t hesitate. Seriously, she’s a game-changer!
“Ash is the copywriter I trust to deliver a sales page that needs no additional work from me.”
She’s extremely talented, has a great way with words, and easily understands how to turn my brief into a great sales page.
Ash is easy to work with, delivers on time (every time), and helps make my life easier…everything an amazing service provider and copywriter should do.
I highly recommend her and I hope we continue working together for a long time!
“Ash managed to get into my shoes (and head) to tease out the better ideas and messages and turn it into something that was fun and enjoyable to read. I was amazed to see how well she understood the topic, what I offered in the course, and my audience.”
FAQs
Can we work on my Services page?
Yes! The sales page doesn’t have to be for a group program or course. It can also be for your 1:1 services, masterminds ― anything you want to sell online.
Why am I writing this myself?
Y’know that saying “give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day. But teach a man to fish, and you feed him for a lifetime?” That’s what we’re doing here, but with copy not sushi.
Most creators I work with are great writers already. But the bit that trips them up is deciding WHAT goes on the page, and how to frame it so it positions their offer as a must-have.
That’s what we work on in Session 1. And once you nail it, the words end up pouring out like molten lava.
From there, you’ve got a copywriter (me!) shaping every draft with you, showing you what’s weakening your message and how to fix it.
And that feedback is gonna be like a voice in the back of your mind that pipes up every single time you go to write a launch email, a social post, or the sales page for the next offer you dream up. (Consider yourself fed for life.)
And if you’d rather hand the whole thing over, I can do that too. Just ask!
Do I get a template to work from or am I starting from scratch?
You’ll be working off my Custom-Fit Sales Page Template as a base. In Session 1, I (re)structure this to fit your offer and show you what needs to go into each section to speak to your audience. It also comes with a handbook to show you different examples of how to write each section.
And remember, you won’t be doing this alone! You don’t have to worry about submitting perfect drafts in the first go. Just write as much as you can, as best as you can and I’ll be there to help guide and refine so it’s what you want to say but better.
Can I use AI in my writing sessions?
If it helps you get the initial draft done in time for our session, then go for it.
I created the Sprint because I’m sick of creators using AI so blindly that they get tangled in the weeds of prompting and lose sight of what the sales page is actually supposed to do. That’s how they end up with a page that sounds good on the surface, but doesn’t translate to sales.
So in Session 1, we get a 360 degree understanding of your offer first, then create a sales page structure that naturally positions your offer as the solution. When I refine your draft LIVE on the calls, you’ll know exactly why specific lines need to change ― which makes you a sharper writer for your next launch (with or without AI).
When will our session times be?
The beauty of 1:1 is that we’ll tailor the call times to your schedule in your time zone. The aim is to schedule 1 x session a week to give you enough time to draft the copy in between sessions, and so you can roll out your offer as fast as possible.